Trying to understand
How it is that I should mend your heart
When these tears start falling
Indeed it will fall
These tears however
Mean nothing to you
Trying to make sense of this
To feel you through the depths of your soul
When I said I will be by your side for all of time
Indeed I will
I feel now, however
I'm tired of not getting an inch through to you
I gave you everything I had
Yet you gave it all away so easy
This is the path I should take, I think
And this love, enough of it
It ends here
wow... that's deep.
ReplyDeletejust stating the obvious :)
DeleteThe guy sitting at the railway track looks familiar. I am pretty sure most teenagers go through something similar in one way or another in their life time. Looking at it from the positive side...it awakens you to the reality of a relationship. If at all a lesson has been learn...it was a valuable one. Pick-up the pieces. move on with your life and remain focus. Cheers zico.
ReplyDeletehaha. yes I agree. but just to clarify, this has nothing to do with me. I want to write a poem about a brokenhearted person from a 1st person perspective. my life has been great so far thanks to support from my family and friends. I appreciate your comment and hope readers will realize this when faced with similar situation.
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